Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Check out our Personal Recounts

I was off to Sean-Michael's house to play tag. fter we played tag we played on the playstation 2. Later we played Seek and Destroy, it was a cool game. After we played the tank game we played Ben 10. We had fun chasing each other.

By Cameron


On Saturday it was my birthday. I got clothes and socks. They were nice. Today I am wearing green socks that only go to my ankle. Mum and I made my birthday cake. It was a bananna cake. It was yummy.

Shontel



Kung Fu is my favourite movie. Mummy, Daddy and I wathced Kung Fu on Saturday night. My favourite movie made me giggle a little bit. So we all snuggled up on the sofa and watched it. Dad smiled at the funny parts and some of the silly parts too. Mummy was making us smile by doing a silly dance.

Shyla


In the weekend I went to my Dad's house because it was his weeken. I played X box 360 because it was fun. I felt lazy when I got there because I was playing with my train set.

Casen



I went to the Warehouse to get me a sword and I got a game to play with. My Uncle Paul and I clocked it.

Whetu




In the weekend I played with my little brother. We played with the power miner. I was happy crashing into trees.

Ethan


Yesterday Cameron came to my house. It was a great time to see him coming to see me. Cameron said, "I like your house". We played Seek and Destroy. It was a crack up when we went into the water. When we played we screamed loudly like a pig.

Sean-Michael



"Pooh that stinks", I said. I had a little look then I went back to bed. Cows were everywhere on the driveway. They looked scary and big. They looked disguisting. There were 20 of them. We had delicious breakfast after Mum's friend scared them away.

Georgia



My sister Gina jammed my finger and it was sore. Also I had to put my finger unde the water. After the blood blister was gone I went to play tennis on the drive way. It was hard to hit the ball. After a while we went back inside to watch TV. Later we had tea and had ice-cream. Then we went to bed and watched TV. After we watched TV we went to sleep. In the morning I had breakfast and went to school.

Michelle

2 comments:

  1. Hi Room 5. You are certainly good writers at Hawera Primary. I am most impressed.
    I will get my class to read your recounts tomorrow.
    I think they will like the way everyone's story is so different. It seems like I can just about hear you talking, the way you write with personal voice.
    I wonder if they will notice the simile in Sean-Michael's story and the way children have used speech marks for people talking.
    Ms Donnell
    Room 2 Kaipara Flats School
    Warkworth

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  2. !LOL! awesome recounts room 5 my favourite story is the one by Michelle about her big sister !GINA! when she jammed
    her finger into the door.!OUCH!
    that must of hurt.Anyway see you all
    tomorrow[hopefully because guess what...] I'm in spragg banner to reprsent Hawera Primary School so we can !WIN! the trophy.!Tannah!

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